2017年6月英语六级作文练习范文:维持信任
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on the saying, “It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it. ” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
参考范文:
(主题评论)If individuals intend to acquire and enjoy long-time trust from either family members, friends, colleagues or acquaintances, it is advisable for them to cherish. (话语引出)Hence, when hearing the saying --It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it.--we can perceive/appreciate its connotations.
(话语联系主题)Apparently, this saying can be naturally associated with the significance of maintaining trust. (现象)In daily communication,it is a common expectation for a host of people to enjoy a harmonious relation with others. (万能强调句:意义)It is a trustful relation that enables us to live in comfort, to work in efficiency, and to study in confidence. (相关人 感受:排比)However, an increasing number of people find it easy to gain others’ trust for one time, but they find it hard to maintain trust for a long time. (万能举例:排比)Two examples can be given: if a student cheats in a test, he may not be trusted by teachers for a term; if an employee lies to his boss for minor matters, he may gain no opportunity of promotion in future. (万能总结)As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of maintaining trust in work and life.
(号召)Do bear in mind: maintaining trust ensures a harmonious relation in communication. (观点:排比递进)I, as a youngster, am convinced that it is exceedingly necessary for college students to build trust with friends and classmates, but it is of greater necessity to maintain trust.