1.Young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons with more activities to embrace this world, which is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most efficient and motivated ones who can gain competitive edge in the future career.

　　年轻人应该多和这个社会接触拓宽他们的视野，这样可以清楚的知道他们想要的是什么以及为什么。有这样视野的学生常常是效率最 高的也是最积极的，在未来的职业中也会获得竞争的优势。

　　Young people should be encouraged to think different and acquire the ability to defend their own ideas, which is the best way to get a full understanding of this world. Students with such capability are usually the most creative and motivated ones who can gain competitive edge in the near future. (替换句)